tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post8387312214535617508..comments2023-04-22T20:33:27.970+01:00Comments on Susan A Eames - Travel, Fiction and Photos: DERELICT - 100 word storySusan A Eameshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comBlogger66125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-43982282451669712772018-02-02T17:42:42.071+00:002018-02-02T17:42:42.071+00:00For sure! For sure! Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-45894413322294261872018-02-02T17:42:24.678+00:002018-02-02T17:42:24.678+00:00Thanks for the feedback, Lavanya. Glad you liked i...Thanks for the feedback, Lavanya. Glad you liked it.Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-78199956941727404932018-01-26T21:15:35.542+00:002018-01-26T21:15:35.542+00:00That’s one situation I would definitely not want t...That’s one situation I would definitely not want to be caught in.Thrifty Campershttps://thriftycampers.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-23191005176977917772018-01-26T02:57:05.882+00:002018-01-26T02:57:05.882+00:00I love the way you narrated the tale. First I thou...I love the way you narrated the tale. First I thought it was a tale of hate only to discover it was a tale of a tale within a tale. Nice write!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16040082834544741070noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-31122917559802346452018-01-24T10:41:23.947+00:002018-01-24T10:41:23.947+00:00Yes, that's what I fear too!Yes, that's what I fear too!Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-28857003607116879242018-01-23T21:43:56.708+00:002018-01-23T21:43:56.708+00:00Oh dear. I think sophie's on a one way trip.Oh dear. I think sophie's on a one way trip.Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263765378083045973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-79752594366138396112018-01-23T19:19:41.449+00:002018-01-23T19:19:41.449+00:00Ah, Anita - ever hopeful, eh?Ah, Anita - ever hopeful, eh?Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-15237852830681884642018-01-23T13:56:35.570+00:002018-01-23T13:56:35.570+00:00Hope Manny is a good man & lets the child be a...Hope Manny is a good man & lets the child be a child...Anita Sabathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13365472694082398017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-19679461096283559972018-01-23T11:22:53.578+00:002018-01-23T11:22:53.578+00:00Thank you, moon - glad you liked it.Thank you, moon - glad you liked it.Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-88875484317207711612018-01-23T06:57:23.211+00:002018-01-23T06:57:23.211+00:00I wonder what awaits their fates now.
wonderfully ...I wonder what awaits their fates now.<br />wonderfully written story.moonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00403317861774718409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-66627274684122146842018-01-22T16:08:48.224+00:002018-01-22T16:08:48.224+00:00Good, 'a bit creepy' was my intention - t...Good, 'a bit creepy' was my intention - thanks for your comments, DeeDee. :)Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-63136240998792100792018-01-22T16:07:57.797+00:002018-01-22T16:07:57.797+00:00Thanks for your comments, Anne.Thanks for your comments, Anne.Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-13980710642890001352018-01-22T07:30:52.507+00:002018-01-22T07:30:52.507+00:00A bit creepy. I want to know what happened next
Lo...A bit creepy. I want to know what happened next<br />Lovely read<br /><a href="https://mrsdashsayss.blogspot.in/2018/01/ff-happy-wedding-anniversary.html" rel="nofollow"> Click Here to see what Mrs. Dash Says</a>Deepahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16764125425140331692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-82009304172426307552018-01-21T23:39:22.186+00:002018-01-21T23:39:22.186+00:00An interesting and evocative story that brings up ...An interesting and evocative story that brings up memories of all those sometimes dangerous things we do as kids. Thanks for sharing and thanks for visiting my blog.<br />Anne from annehiga.comAnne Higahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02082512178144412035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-21937448711838641552018-01-21T22:46:37.606+00:002018-01-21T22:46:37.606+00:00Thanks, Sarah - leaving you guessing was my intent...Thanks, Sarah - leaving you guessing was my intention! :)<br />Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-85161280436590668202018-01-21T19:45:59.838+00:002018-01-21T19:45:59.838+00:00Now if Manny's a nice person this will end wel...Now if Manny's a nice person this will end well and they'll have a fun time imagining where Sophie's driving. If not, I hope Sophie can bite and punch hard. Wonderfully set up to leave the reader guessing....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-68511038353396479972018-01-20T16:35:49.456+00:002018-01-20T16:35:49.456+00:00Thank you for that lovely feedback!Thank you for that lovely feedback!Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-40754319117935091292018-01-20T15:59:56.349+00:002018-01-20T15:59:56.349+00:00Wonderfully crafted. Perfect flash that promotes s...Wonderfully crafted. Perfect flash that promotes speculation.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-90543445249323063132018-01-20T15:50:10.770+00:002018-01-20T15:50:10.770+00:00Thanks for that analysis, Suzanne! :)Thanks for that analysis, Suzanne! :)Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-44065962126395463812018-01-20T15:37:07.125+00:002018-01-20T15:37:07.125+00:00From his thoughts I judge Manny to be a harmless h...From his thoughts I judge Manny to be a harmless homeless man who just wanted some shelter to sleep off his hangover. He probably has more to fear from naughty Sophie than she from him. Mother should have warned Sophie against going into the scrap yard so she's partly to blame also. Good writing, Susan. :) --- SuzanneP.S. Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05115966559427725610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-77204157076378979982018-01-19T21:29:54.409+00:002018-01-19T21:29:54.409+00:00However it turns out, it probably won't be goo...However it turns out, it probably won't be good. :)Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-14343130335857028942018-01-19T21:06:02.243+00:002018-01-19T21:06:02.243+00:00I think that they might cause damage to each other...I think that they might cause damage to each other.... but maybe it's worst for Manny in the end... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-1005573029106553512018-01-19T15:55:32.233+00:002018-01-19T15:55:32.233+00:00That's very kind of you - and very motivating!...That's very kind of you - and very motivating!Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-43173591190821583182018-01-19T14:04:53.989+00:002018-01-19T14:04:53.989+00:00Well, if you decide to do so, I'm looking forw...Well, if you decide to do so, I'm looking forward to it!The Silver Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00730805376957629641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6369429383948592696.post-8000736477226792962018-01-19T14:03:53.951+00:002018-01-19T14:03:53.951+00:00It's true that he might just be a sad homeless...It's true that he might just be a sad homeless man who has claimed ownership of the car and now wants to befriend the child. Interesting idea to turn this into a longer story... might just try that.Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.com