Wednesday, 8 July 2020

THE TRUTH ABOUT FAERIES - 100 Word Story

Some say they're all around us. But are they? 


PHOTO PROMPT @ A. Noni Mouse

The Truth About Faeries


Randolph stepped through the door calling out, 'I'm home.'
Silence.
He closed his eyes as a fresh wave of grief hit him. He had forgotten again. Randolph sighed, went into the kitchen and faltered.
The mountain of dirty dishes was washed and stacked.
Randolph frowned. He had not cleaned his kitchen for weeks, yet it was sparkling.
He recalled his argument with Batty Patty about faeries. Patty insisted they didn't only cause mischief but were responsible for good deeds when someone was in need.
Randolph said she was talking nonsense.
''You'd be surprised,' said Batty Patty.
Randolph was indeed surprised.


Hope you enjoyed this story and I look forward to your comments. 


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48 comments:

  1. Tannille8 July 2020 at 13:26

    My guess is Batty Patty is the fairy? Feel good story. ��

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    1. Susan A Eames8 July 2020 at 15:32

      I'll keep you guessing! Thanks for commenting, Tannille.

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  2. Rochelle Wisoff-Fields8 July 2020 at 13:56

    Dear Susan,

    I wonder if Batty Patty didn't make the magic happen. Sweet story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. Anita Sabat8 July 2020 at 14:05

    Batty Patty proved herself right by being the fairy!
    I believe in miracles & magic. May our lives have more of this!
    Happy story!

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    1. Susan A Eames8 July 2020 at 15:35

      Ah, but is she one of the Little People?? Glad you liked the story, Anita.

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  4. Helen Laycock8 July 2020 at 14:17

    It was definitely the faeries! I am reminded of The Elves and the Shoemaker, my all time favourite Ladybird book.

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    1. Susan A Eames8 July 2020 at 15:37

      Ah, I think it might have been faeries too. I'm not familiar with The Elves and the Shoemaker story, Helen.

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  5. Neil MacDonald8 July 2020 at 15:39

    People's kindmess is the real magic

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    1. Susan A Eames8 July 2020 at 16:01

      It is, isn't it? And kindness is what everyone needs right now.

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  6. Iain Kelly8 July 2020 at 15:50

    My guess is Batty Patty did it to help him believe!

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  7. Trent McDonald8 July 2020 at 18:41

    So, is Batty Patty related to Seamus and Paddy? Sure, they are Leprechauns, not Fairies, but how many humans really know the difference?

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  8. Susan A Eames8 July 2020 at 18:53

    Batty Patty a female Leprechaun? Maybe, maybe... :)
    p.s. Leprechauns are a type of fairy!

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  9. plaridel8 July 2020 at 19:33

    one good rule to follow: be always on the good side of faeries. :)

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    1. Susan A Eames9 July 2020 at 09:40

      He he - yes, be nice to the Little People. :)

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  10. Jade Li8 July 2020 at 20:27

    However it happened, I'm glad it did. Good story, Susan.

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  11. Brenda Cox9 July 2020 at 02:39

    What a nice surprise for Randolph, and a bit of joy to help with his grief. Nice story, Susan!

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    1. Susan A Eames9 July 2020 at 09:41

      Yes, it will have given him a little boost.

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  12. Dale9 July 2020 at 03:20

    Would you send those fairies my way, please?
    Wonderful story!

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    1. Susan A Eames9 July 2020 at 09:42

      He he - I'm not sure it works that way. Thanks for feedback, Dale.

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  13. C. E. Ayr9 July 2020 at 10:58

    You got Batty Patty's number, Susan?
    She sounds like my kinda gal!

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  14. Jolly9 July 2020 at 11:41

    I could do with one such fairy :) Lovely story Susan :)
    -Justjoyfulness

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    1. Susan A Eames9 July 2020 at 15:38

      We all need the Little People in our lives sometimes! :)

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  15. Aahana Aggarwal9 July 2020 at 14:02

    Interesting read Susan!
    Check out my uptake on the prompt at wordpress too!

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    1. Susan A Eames9 July 2020 at 15:39

      Thanks, Aahana.
      I'd love to check your story and I will if I find it, but I can't reach it by clicking on your name!

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  16. liz young9 July 2020 at 15:47

    Aw, that was sweet - I hope the presence of fairies helps him overcome his grief too.

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    1. Susan A Eames9 July 2020 at 21:04

      Maybe they'll decide to keep him company when he's feeling particularly lonely. :)

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  17. Keith's Ramblings9 July 2020 at 15:50

    We could all do with a faerie in our life, but sadly they are about the only thing you can't get on Amazon.

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    1. Susan A Eames9 July 2020 at 21:05

      He he - no, Amazon can't help with this one.

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  18. draliman9 July 2020 at 19:41

    The last line wrapped it up nicely!

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  19. Gabriella9 July 2020 at 22:37

    Very sweet story. I like how we go from sadness to comfort and a smile.

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    1. Susan A Eames12 July 2020 at 10:11

      Thanks for the feedback, Gabriella. Glad to know the story worked for you.

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  20. Doodle T9 July 2020 at 23:49

    The fairies not only cleaned, but they brought hope...quite lovely indeed.

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    1. Susan A Eames12 July 2020 at 10:12

      Yes - perhaps this is a lesson to never underestimate what others can do for us. :)

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  21. Subroto12 July 2020 at 14:41

    A bitter-sweet story, I guess some of his friends have stepped in to play the role of the helpful fairy.

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    1. Susan A Eames12 July 2020 at 21:31

      Whatever the truth of it - someone put a little magic back into his life.

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  22. Nobbinmaug12 July 2020 at 18:25

    What do faeries eat? I'll take two.

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    1. Susan A Eames12 July 2020 at 21:34

      There are many rumours about their preferred foods! :)

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  23. Sandra Crook13 July 2020 at 11:28

    Oh that was sweet. I wonder if Batty Patty is doing anything this week.

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    1. Susan A Eames14 July 2020 at 11:52

      The locals might call her 'Batty', but she has a heart of gold under her eccentricities.

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  24. Magarisa13 July 2020 at 21:13

    What a kind gesture! Well-written and heartfelt.

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    1. Susan A Eames14 July 2020 at 11:53

      Thanks for the feedback, Magarisa - much appreciated.

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  25. Laurie16 July 2020 at 11:38

    Sounds like this is one fairy he certainly needs!

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